The List of
Factors Affecting Your Mode
People’s mood may change every moment. People may be a
different person in five minutes. Last summer, we all family went to picnic.
Everyone was so happy because of weather. After one or two days, it was rain
and again we all family came together. There was no problem but everyone seemed
uncomfortable. Actually, there are many factors that influence your mood. Sometimes,
this factor is people’s behaviors, your cloths’ color, weather
conditions or your health’s condition.
Firstly, people’s behaviors
affect your mood positively or negatively. If you have pessimistic a friend,
you have not got chance for being happy. Your friend’s ideas affect you
negatively. You may think that there is no good thing in the world. Pessimistic
people take away you from your hopes. While you are choosing a friend, you
should think her or his attitude about life. When you have got optimistic
friend around you, you may success for a lot of things.
Secondly, your cloths’ colors affect your
mood positively or negatively. There is also the sense of colors and
almost all the meanings of the colors are close to each other in the world. There
are effects of color on human psychology. For example; warm colors such as red can
bring you joy. One of the cool colors is blue which can give you calmness. Black color concentration and self-confidence increases. Purple
color may adversely affect the subconscious.
Thirdly, weather conditions
affect your mood positively or negatively. Cloudy weather has a negative impact on human
psychology. In this situation, people become restless and nervous.
Because of the level of serotot hormone, people behave as depressive. Therefore,
especially in northern countries called winter depression disease is seen. You should
sport and stay away from alcohol and cigarettes. Sunny weather affects positive
people. On the basis of this event, sunlight affects the level of
certain chemicals of human emotion.
Finally, your health’s condition affects
your mood positively or negatively. When you are ill, you can’t feel happy or
energetic. The level of your mood is on the ground. You do not want to speak
with people or you do not want to somewhere. Generally, you are in the bed. In
contrast this mood, when you have got any problems, you feel energetic.
Generally, you are sociable because you have love of life. The level of your
mood may be over the clouds.
To sum up, there are a lot of factors
that influence your mood. These are people’s behaviors, your cloths’ color,
weather conditions or your health’s condition. Whenever you feel bad mood, you
should think these causes and you may find your problem’s cause. Also, you may
find other factors that influence your mood.
1-) People may be a different person in five minutes. (revise this sentence)
YanıtlaSil2-) Last summer, we all family went to picnic. (article) (paragraph 1, line 2)
3-) serotot (spelling) (paragraph 4, line 3)
salih 1)People may become a different person in five minutes. ( ?)
Sil2) Which article ? I checked my sentence by online text correction but still, I can't find my mistake.
3) 'serotonin' Thank you for comments.
salih 1)People may become a different person in five minutes. ( ?)
YanıtlaSil2) Which article ? I checked my sentence by online text correction but still, I can't find my mistake.
3) 'serotonin' Thank you for comments.
1)Sometimes, this factor is people’s behaviors, your cloths’ color, weather conditions or your health’s condition.==> You can use a modal. For example: Sometimes, this can be....
YanıtlaSil2)Pessimistic people take away you from your hopes. Rewrite this sentence
=> You can't write ' take away you from'.
3)...you may success for* a lot of things.=> 'for' is not necessary.
1) We can also use a modal.In this sentence, I gave the certain factors.So, I couldn't use 'can be'.
Sil2)We can use 'take away ... from'
3) ..you may successful for a lot of things.
1) If you have pessimistic a friend ---> word order
YanıtlaSil2) When you have got optimistic friend around you ---> missing an article
3) your cloths’ colors affect your mood positively or negatively --->" colors of your cloths" is more correct.
1) If you have a pessimistic friend..
Sil2)When you have got an optimistic friend around you ..
3)my sentence is also correct :)
Generally, we use "of " for objects instead of "s".
Sil