Argumentative Essay 2-First Draft

                   Why Are Americans Rapidly Becoming More Obese?

                 Obesity is the accumulation of excess fat in the body. People think that obesity is due to excessive consumption. It is believed that obesity is a disease. Nowadays, obesity is so common in America. One of every three people in America is obese. Everyone think that reason is eating much food. I think there is no only reason. There are many reasons for obesity in America.

                  First, life is much more sedentary in America. Physical inactivity is one of the risk factors causing death in the world. In America, the technology is advanced level so people can do a lot of work from their seats. Also, spending more time with television and computer causes disease such as obesity or shorten lifespan. People, who spend free time with computer and television, do not take the time to exercise are obese.

               Second, obesity is related poverty. In America, fresh and quality foods are very expensive. So, people buy stale and poor quality foods. People put on weight quickly by eating these carbohydrate foods. Most of the people think that rich people have a lot of money so they eat too and they get fat but the exact opposite is true. Rich people are not overweight because they have quality foods and they eat orderly.

              Final, people do not know negative effects of fast-food. Fast-food do not balanced in terms of certain nutrients so it may cause some health problems. At the beginning of health problems, obesity comes first. In America, some people wanted to warn people about fast-food’s negative effects.  After there were several cases, Cheeseburger Bill which is a draft law was created. According to this draft law, people did not complain from food manufacturers. This draft law was not accepted but people’s right against fast-food companies was blocked in front of justice.

              To sum up, obesity is common disease in America and there are a lot of reasons for obesity. First, Physical inactivity causes obesity. Second, unhealthy eating causes obesity. Final, fast food diet causes obesity. If the rate of obese people increases, the rate of death will increase. We should inform people about obesity disease.

                    

 

Argumentative Essay 1

                                       MORAL EDUCATION IN SCHOOLS       

        Children begin to moral education by applying the rules. Basic moral education is given by the parents.  First, a family teaches the rules of society. Mothers and fathers contribute to the moral education of children with attitudes. A family gives moral education to their children until school age. Even after children start to go school, more family wants their children’s to continue moral education at schools. While there are lot families who support this idea, there are also lot families who do not support moral education at schools when their children become a youth. I think schools should provide moral education for youth. There are many reasons for it.

         A criticism of moral education in school is that moral education in schools teaches young people to fulfill responsibilities. When a student does not do homework, her/his teacher punishes her/him. The teacher says that he/she should do homework. The teacher mentions about this small responsibility teach them to take great responsibility, moreover, it teaches using time equally. Thanks to moral education in schools, youth spends time not only activity but also responsibility.

         Some people say that moral education teaches to act respectful to all people. In family, youth learns that they should behave respectfully to elder people. In school, they learn that they should behave respectfully to all people. Teachers teach that young people should also behave respectfully to little people. Young people can understand that respect does not connect to age. School teaches this moral value to youth.

         A criticism of moral education in school is that moral education affects forming character. Schools show that how a person should be. Schools direct youth to become beneficial and upright. A teacher mentions about which character type is the best for humaneness. Generally, moral education is not enough to being upright. I think character is affected by family.

          In conclusion, schools should provide moral education for youth. There are many reasons for it. First reason is that moral education in school is that moral education teaches young people to fulfill responsibilities. Second is that moral education teaches to act respectful to all people. Third is that moral education in school is that moral education affects forming character.