Cause-Effect 2- first draft

                                               MUSIC IS FOOD FOR THE SOUL

            Music is a part of people’s culture and traditions. Every society has different kinds of music. Actually, every person listen different kinds of music. Your mood affects your music selection. For every mood, people listen to music. Generally, people think that music is food for the soul because there are the therapeutic effects of listening to music. Listening to music helps reducing stress, strengthening memory, working of heart, preventing of ageing human brain.

         One effect of music is that music can reduce stress. As a result of many researching, everyday listening music reduce stress. People who listen to music have more positive feelings. Music does not make the same effect on all people. The same music may show different effects depending on mood at that time. When you listen to your favorite music, you feel relax and positive. You should listen to music every time such as going to work or going to school.

         Another effect of music is that music can strengthen memory. Studying music lesson develop children’s brain more positive. Music lesson helps remember words in a list. People who took music lessons from an early age, has been observed to be more successful in remembering words. Listening to music should begin from infancy to benefit the positive effects of music. In California, after listening to a Mozart sonata, mice showed very high performance in tests of learning and memory.

        Another effect of music is that music affects working of heart. People meet with the music in the womb because even a man's heart depends on a regular rhythm. There is a relationship between music and heart health. Researchers have found that listening to upbeat music provides more blood flow to blood vessels. When you listen to anxiety and fear music, this rate is low. Also, music reduces anxiety. So, people feel less pain. On the other hand, music can reduce stress so heart is being affected positively.

         Another effect of music is that music prevents ageing of brain. Despite of the advancing age, music education may make a keen intelligence. Listening to classical music and activating different parts of the brain is very important. With those caveats, contacting with each other of brain cells are getting better quality and intelligence is increasing.

           In conclusion, effects of listening to music are that music helps reducing stress, strengthening memory, working of heart, preventing of ageing human brain. We can’t say that listening to music has always negative effects. There are a lot of people who damage themselves after listening to some music. For example, while people were listening to Müslüm Gürses, they were injured their body.

 

Cause Effect Essay 1- Second Draft

                                               The List of Factors Affecting Your Mode

                  People’s mood may change every moment. People may become a different personality in five minutes. Last summer, we all family went to picnic. Everyone was so happy because of weather. After one or two days, it was rain and again we all family came together. There was no problem but everyone seemed uncomfortable. Actually, there are many factors that influence your mood. Sometimes, this factor is people’s behaviors, your cloths’ color, weather conditions or your health’s condition.

              Firstly, people’s behaviors affect your mood positively or negatively. If you have a pessimistic friend, you have not got chance for being happy. Your friend’s ideas affect you negatively. You may think that there is no good thing in the world. Pessimistic people take away you from your hopes. While you are choosing a friend, you should think her or his attitude about life. When you have got an optimistic friend around you, you may successful for a lot of things.

            Secondly, colors of your cloths affect your mood positively or negatively. There is also the sense of colors and almost all the meanings of the colors are close to each other in the world. There are effects of color on human psychology. For example; warm colors such as red can bring you joy. One of the cool colors is blue which can give you calmness. Black color concentration and self-confidence increases. Purple color may adversely affect the subconscious.

               Thirdly, weather conditions affect your mood positively or negatively. Cloudy weather has a negative impact on human psychology. In this situation, people become restless and nervous. Because of the level of serotonin hormone, people behave as depressive. Therefore, especially in northern countries called winter depression disease is seen. You should sport and stay away from alcohol and cigarettes. Sunny weather affects positive people. On the basis of this event, sunlight affects the level of certain chemicals of human emotion.

           Finally, your health’s condition affects your mood positively or negatively. When you are ill, you can’t feel happy or energetic. The level of your mood is on the ground. You do not want to speak with people or you do not want to somewhere. Generally, you are in the bed. In contrast this mood, when you have got any problems, you feel energetic. Generally, you are sociable because you have love of life. The level of your mood may be over the clouds.

         To sum up, there are a lot of factors that influence your mood. These are people’s behaviors, your cloths’ color, weather conditions or your health’s condition. Whenever you feel bad mood, you should think these causes and you may find your problem’s cause. Also, you may find other factors that influence your mood.

 

Cause and Effect Essay 1-First Draft

    

                                                The List of Factors Affecting Your Mode

                  People’s mood may change every moment. People may be a different person in five minutes. Last summer, we all family went to picnic. Everyone was so happy because of weather. After one or two days, it was rain and again we all family came together. There was no problem but everyone seemed uncomfortable. Actually, there are many factors that influence your mood. Sometimes, this factor is people’s behaviors, your cloths’ color, weather conditions or your health’s condition.

              Firstly, people’s behaviors affect your mood positively or negatively. If you have pessimistic a friend, you have not got chance for being happy. Your friend’s ideas affect you negatively. You may think that there is no good thing in the world. Pessimistic people take away you from your hopes. While you are choosing a friend, you should think her or his attitude about life. When you have got optimistic friend around you, you may success for a lot of things.

            Secondly, your cloths’ colors affect your mood positively or negatively. There is also the sense of colors and almost all the meanings of the colors are close to each other in the world. There are effects of color on human psychology. For example; warm colors such as red can bring you joy. One of the cool colors is blue which can give you calmness. Black color concentration and self-confidence increases. Purple color may adversely affect the subconscious.

               Thirdly, weather conditions affect your mood positively or negatively. Cloudy weather has a negative impact on human psychology. In this situation, people become restless and nervous. Because of the level of serotot hormone, people behave as depressive. Therefore, especially in northern countries called winter depression disease is seen. You should sport and stay away from alcohol and cigarettes. Sunny weather affects positive people. On the basis of this event, sunlight affects the level of certain chemicals of human emotion.

           Finally, your health’s condition affects your mood positively or negatively. When you are ill, you can’t feel happy or energetic. The level of your mood is on the ground. You do not want to speak with people or you do not want to somewhere. Generally, you are in the bed. In contrast this mood, when you have got any problems, you feel energetic. Generally, you are sociable because you have love of life. The level of your mood may be over the clouds.

         To sum up, there are a lot of factors that influence your mood. These are people’s behaviors, your cloths’ color, weather conditions or your health’s condition. Whenever you feel bad mood, you should think these causes and you may find your problem’s cause. Also, you may find other factors that influence your mood.

 

division essay-Second draft

                                         The Altered Properties of Istanbul

             Every empire has added something new to a city and a lot of things have been changed. In Istanbul, which was the capital of many governments, these changes can be clearly seen. The language, art, and education of İstanbul have been changed by many governments.

          Language is the altered property of Istanbul. Every empire uses their language because spoken language shows which empire is dominant. During the Byzantine Empire, Greek was the official language in Istanbul. After the conquest of Istanbul, the official language has changed. Ottoman Empire used their language which was Turkish. Within the borders of the Empire, there were communities belonging to different language groups. The Ottoman Turkish used in the palace, although the areas under the domination used other languages. Also, when the republic of Turkey was established, the government announced the official language Turkish.

       Another altered property of Istanbul is art. Generally, the Byzantine Empire was built churches. They showed their own art with the church. One of the most distinctive features of Byzantine architecture, the structure is in the form of giant domes. On the other hand, murals, mosaics, miniatures and decorative arts such as labor Byzantine ivory were very good. Byzantine mosaic art and the most beautiful examples of the wall ornamentation appear in Hagias Sophia, Kariye Camii, Tekfur Palace and the Church of San Vitale in Ravenna. After this empire, Ottoman Empire showed their art through the mosques. Great mosques were built many part of Istanbul. For example; Selimiye Mosque shows Ottoman Empire’s art.

        Another altered property of Istanbul is education. During the Byzantine Empire, education was given in the monasteries. Mostly boys were sent to school. Besides the religion courses, ancient Greek philosophy, language and literature, also mathematics courses were given. A lot of Byzantine donated big money or property to the monasteries. The monastery library was limited to mostly ritual books. Nevertheless, there was some great wide range of books in libraries. In Ottoman Empire, madrasas were established in order to educate people who are knowledgeable. The religious sciences were also offered positive sciences in madrasahs. Such as library buildings were located near madrasas.

        To sum up, each government adds something to the culture. The altered things aren’t only language, art and education. These changes can be observed in all areas of life. Every time, there are not positive effects. There can be negative effects.