Second Draft: Comparison and contrast 1

                My Grandmother’s  Generation  And  My Generation

While our country is developing, the  rate  of generation   differences   is   increasing   day  by  day. I  can  give so easy  examples  from   my   family. There   are  a  lot  of  differences  between   my    grandmother’s    generation    and  my  generation. For   example; spending   time   on  work, using  technologic  device  and  clothing  style.

  First, my grandmother’s generation spent  their   time with  housework. They did not work  for  earning  money. When they were young,  only  men   earned   money. Nowadays, my generation spend less   time with   housework   than  my  grandmother’s  generation. We are working  for  earning  money. We don’t wait money from  only  men. My generation can earn  money the same amount   men’s  money. However, my generation can have job which  men  can  do.

   Second, my  grandmother’s  generation  use  technologic  device  less  than  my  generation. They  were  able to use     only  home  appliances. Also, my generation can use  home  appliances. Addition  to  home   appliances, my  generation  use other technologic  devices  such  as  mobile  phone ,  computer. Thanks  to this  advantage ,  my  generation   can do a lot of works   in a short   time.

Thirdly, clothing   style of my  grandmother’s  generation   differs from  my  generation. They  wore  long  dresses  and  black  cloth. This  style  has  changed  up our  time. It   is not  matter  that wearing long  or  short   dresses  for my  generation. Everybody   can wear everything. My generation also  wear headscarf .Formerly, women didn’t use headscarf freely.But now, we are so free  while we are using it.

Day by day, new differences are added to  life.  We  can  say that  these  differences  will  change  for  every  new  generation because of developing technology. Today, we think that  our grandmother’s generation is different from ours. When we have got grandchild, they can be think that our generation would  separate  from theirs.

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1.  Spending   their   time on   work

a. My   grandmother’s   generation      
         1. Spending time at home with housework
         2. Didn’t work for earn money

   b. My generation

          1. Living their home less than my grandmother’s generation

         2. Earning money as amount as men’s money

 2. Using technologic device

a. My grandmother’s   generation

            1. Using home appliances

b. My generation
 
             1. Addition to home appliances-using mobile phone

  3. Clothing style

a. My grandmother’s   generation

           1. Wearing long dress

            2. Wearing black cloth

b. My generation

           1. It isn’t matter that wearing long or short dress

            2. Wearing head scarf